after the part of you

i feel the twists
vertebrae of your neck
twisting on fine lines
waves and nines

i hide in forests of evergreen
wondering to wander
how you feel seen in shades of shadows
you walk with force
touch with delicacy

i extend into forms of diversion
forgetting where the silence goes
how breath curls beneath your questions

in rooms we never finished painting
i still trace shapes in corners
ghosts of your gestures
hung like lanterns in my chest

time folds softly in your absence
a paper crane sinking
into the lake of my waiting

still, i tilt toward the sound
of your unsaid return
holding the hilt
i forever found lurking

we move in night
i speak into why i say
what never quite means enough
how names soften when echoed too long
how longing is a quiet language

i ask the dark to hold me
the way you never said you would
but did
in the space between touch and retreat

i speak because the silence remembers
and i listen
for the part of you
that never meant to leave

words by dominic riccitello

6 responses to “after the part of you”

  1. Absolutely wonderfully penned. It took my breath away. Bravissimo

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  2. Mind blowin… no better words to express 🧡🧡🧡

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  3. This is beautiful. I want to cry while reading it, but I’m not really sure why. That isn’t normal for me, lol. Great work. Thank you for sharing your words brought to life through living, even the tough parts – especially the tough moments. Thanks for helping me feel. Hope you are doing well. 🙂 I’ll be sure to visit again!

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    1. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️

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